Plum on a Plate
the Haunted Farm
One day plum who was a plum, adventurer
and a little bit of a detective was invited to a farm were his uncle Julius
worked. He arrived at the farm, Bob and Julius greeted him. Bob exclaimed, “I
thought you could help, strange things were happening here. Dead cows and
calves have been walking at night,” he paused to take a breath, “and all sorts
of broken machinery have been crawling and rolling, destroying things but the
barn, corral, and the house.” Julius spoke, “There must be a source.” Bob
pronounced, “The only way that can stop them is to destroy them.” All of a
sudden they heard screeching, and saw a tractor crawling towards them. Bob
implied, “Let’s go into my house.” Once all of them were inside the house, they
heard screeching and banging. “Do you have any machinery that is not alive and
that can destroy things?” Plum exclaimed. Bob said, “I have an excavator, a
bulldozer, and a big four wheel drive tractor with a front plow, and they’re
also in the barn.” “Let’s get in the pickup and race over there.” Julius stated.
When they got there, Julius parked the truck and they went inside the barn.
Plum declared, “I will take the excavator.” “I will take the tractor.” said Julius,
Bob announced, “I will take the bulldozer.” They all heard bang, and they saw a
bunch of dead cows walking towards them. Plum yells, “CHARGE!!!” as they ran
over them. When they got out of the barn, they saw everything was crawling
towards them. “I figured it out!” Bob yelled. “What?” Plum expressed. Bob explained,
“It rained chemicals, the other day, and it must of reacted with all the dead
and nonworking things, I took a sample of it, I accidentally spilled it into
water, it turned into the substance, I went outside and I saw a dead cow
walking towards me, I threw the liquid at it, and it was dead again. There was
a little bit left, but I forgot where I put it.” He said again, “Also, there’s
a lump in my pocket that keeps annoying me,” he reached into his pocket and
pulled out the chemical in a bottle. Bob exclaimed, “So that’s where it went!” Julius
stated “There’s a water tank truck behind the house we can use to spray the
chemicals at the machinery and cows.” They drove over there to the truck, and
Bob put the rest of the chemical into the water which turned the water into
chemical rain. Bob announced that he will drive and Plum and Julius decided
that they will work the hose, Bob turned on the pump to the tank. They were off;
and started spraying the machinery and cows that were walking towards them,
which were moving faster and faster. Plum and Plums uncle sprayed all the cows
and machinery in sight. They thought they got all the machinery and cows, out
of nowhere, they heard a terrible screech, they looked behind them, and saw a bucket
wheel excavator; Bob quivered “So that’s where it went! I was trying to find
it, so I could get some parts from it.” Plum yelled “How could you lose
something that big!!!” The bucket wheel excavator turned towards them and
started chasing them at full speed. Bob says, “Jump!” and they did. The bucket
wheel excavator ripped the back of the truck, and it let out a terrible screeching
noise then stopped. Bob, Plum, and Plums uncle went back to the house to have
some tea after all the excitement. Bob said, “Thanks Plum!” Plum conveyed, “It
was my pleasure.” Plum went home; he sat on his plate waiting for another
adventure.
THE
END
Good job. I liked the part when Plum asked Bob: "how could you lose something that big!"
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What amazing creativity in this humorous story Isaac! Great use of dialogue. Your character, Plum, is funny because here this small fruit is taking on dead cows! Thanks for posting!
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